Here are the issues I found in Chapters 8 and 9. Jon Forrest
M = mistake U = unclear T = typo E = text change C = comment (T) Pg. 191 "like librarian puppet" -> "like librarian-puppet" (T) Pg. 191 "rspec-puppet, rspec-system and integrating" -> "rspec-puppet, rspec-system, and integrating" (U) Pg. 194 "mysql::db provider" What's a "provider"? (T) Pg. 196 "The puppet-module tool" -> "The Puppet Module tool" (This is how you've referred to it up to now.) (T) Pg. 197 "in your version control" -> "in your version control system" (U) Pg. 197 "you will need to remove the contents" Do you mean to remove the contents of /etc/puppet/modules from the file system or from the version control system, or both? (E) Pg. 197 "You can specify the version" -> "You can specify the version you want to install" (E) Pg. 198 "to version control" -> "to your version control system" (C) Pg. 198 You haven't mentioned Puppetfile.lock before. You should say something about it if it's so critical that it needs to be kept in a version control system. (T) Pg. 199 "First up is puppet lint" -> "First up is puppet-lint" (E) Pg. 202 "want a fixtures file" -> "want a .fixtures.yml file" (T) Pg. 202 "we have modified fixtures.yml" -> "we have modified .fixtures.yml" (E) Pg. 203 "specify osfamily as one of the OS families" -> "assign osfamily the name of one of the OS families" (E) Pg. 203 "it will throw an error" -> "spec will throw an error" (Is the name of this tool "spec" or "rspec"?) (T) Pg. 208 "creating the rspec system directory layout" -> "Creating the rspec-system directory layout" (T) Pg. 210 "and then CD to the Vagrant folder" -> " "and then cd to the Vagrant folder" (T) Pg. 210 "Accessing rspec system Vagrant machines" -> "Accessing rspec-system Vagrant machines" (E) Pg. 217 "sent to the master server" -> "sent to the Puppet master" (E) Pg. 217 "success or failure of those resources" -> "success or failure of those changes" (E) Pg. 221 "Specifying this tag will make the report return all error messages" -> "Specifying this tag will make Puppet send all error messages" (E) Pg. 221 "We can install RRDTools via package" -> "We can install the RRDTools package" (E) Pg. 221 "Red Hat, CentOS, and Mandriva versions" -> "Red Hat, CentOS, and Mandriva" (E) Pg. 222 "Both gems should work to produce" -> "Both gems should produce" (E) Pg. 222 "in the form of an HTTP Post" -> "via an HTTP Post" (E) Pg. 222 "on the master" -> "on the Puppet master" (E) Pg. 222 "supports the importation of" "supports importing" (U) Pg. 223 "Instead, the report processors are stored in the lib/puppet/reports directory. For example, on an Ubuntu Puppet master we'd add our custom report processor to the /usr/lib/ruby/vendor_ruby/puppet/reports" directory" The second location mentioned, /usr/lib/ruby/vendor_ruby/puppet/reports, is not in lib/puppet/reports, as the first sentence says it should be. (E) Pg. 223 "You could also parse particular" -> "You could also filter particular" (E) Pg. 223 "We also wrote our summary report out to a directory named after the Puppet agent host located under the reports directory" -> "We also wrote our summary report out to a directory, located under the reports directory, named after the Puppet agent host" (T) Pg. 225 "reporting data from thecode" -> "reporting data from the code" -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Puppet Users" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/puppet-users/CAF0Z9iqHSxSY35unOZtC-aW3hS4shw6ak9z%2Bnz0RNzV2tvXVOQ%40mail.gmail.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
