Less lines exeeding the character limit, less nesting, less duplicate code,
more readable sprintf arguments.

Co-authored-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lampre...@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger <d.jae...@proxmox.com>
---
Middle ground sounds good to me :) And separate lines for arguments look nice.
 PVE/VZDump.pm | 36 +++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/PVE/VZDump.pm b/PVE/VZDump.pm
index fa387299..59062d2b 100644
--- a/PVE/VZDump.pm
+++ b/PVE/VZDump.pm
@@ -258,24 +258,26 @@ sub sendmail {
 
     # text part
     my $text = $err ? "$err\n\n" : '';
-    $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %10s  %s\n", qw(VMID NAME STATUS 
TIME SIZE FILENAME));
+    my $namelength = 20;
+    $text .= sprintf (
+       "%-10s %-${namelength}s %-6s %10s %10s  %s\n",
+       qw(VMID NAME STATUS TIME SIZE FILENAME)
+    );
     foreach my $task (@$tasklist) {
-       my $vmid = $task->{vmid};
-       if  ($task->{state} eq 'ok') {
-
-           $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %10s  %s\n", $vmid,
-                               substr($task->{hostname}, 0, 20),
-                               $task->{state},
-                               format_time($task->{backuptime}),
-                               format_size ($task->{size}),
-                               $task->{target});
-       } else {
-           $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %8.2fMB  %s\n", $vmid,
-                               substr($task->{hostname}, 0, 20),
-                               $task->{state},
-                               format_time($task->{backuptime}),
-                               0, '-');
-       }
+       my $name = substr($task->{hostname}, 0, $namelength);
+       my $successful = $task->{state} eq 'ok';
+       my $size = $successful ? format_size ($task->{size}) : 0;
+       my $filename = $successful ? $task->{target} : '-';
+       my $size_fmt = $successful ? "%10s": "%8.2fMB";
+       $text .= sprintf(
+           "%-10s %-${namelength}s %-6s %10s $size_fmt  %s\n",
+           $task->{vmid},
+           $name,
+           $task->{state},
+           format_time($task->{backuptime}),
+           $size,
+           $filename,
+       );
     }
 
     my $text_log_part;
-- 
2.20.1


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