minor corrections to the introduction and wake-on-lan section of "Proxmox VE Node Management"
also expand introduction, based on new content Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <[email protected]> --- changes from v1: * New patch. May as well do some fix-up while I'm here! changes from v2: * unchanged pvenode.adoc | 28 +++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/pvenode.adoc b/pvenode.adoc index 1600e43..e036d93 100644 --- a/pvenode.adoc +++ b/pvenode.adoc @@ -24,11 +24,13 @@ ifdef::wiki[] endif::wiki[] endif::manvolnum[] -The {PVE} node management tool (`pvenode`) allows to control node specific +The {PVE} node management tool (`pvenode`) allows you to control node specific settings and resources. -Currently `pvenode` allows to set a node's description and to manage -the node's SSL certificates used for the API and the web GUI through `pveproxy`. +Currently `pvenode` allows you to set a node's description, run various +bulk operations on the node's guests, view the node's task history, and +manage the node's SSL certificates, which are used for the API and the web GUI +through `pveproxy`. ifdef::manvolnum[] include::output-format.adoc[] @@ -43,7 +45,7 @@ Examples Both files need to be PEM encoded. `certificate.key` contains the private key and `certificate.crt` contains the whole certificate chain. -.Setup ACME account and order a certificate for local node. +.Setup ACME account and order a certificate for the local node. ----- pvenode acme account register default [email protected] @@ -56,19 +58,19 @@ endif::manvolnum[] Wake-on-LAN ~~~~~~~~~~~ -Wake-on-LAN (WoL) allows to switch on a sleeping computer in the network by -sending a magic packet. At least one NIC must support this feature and the -respective option needs to be enabled in the computers firmware (BIOS/UEFI) +Wake-on-LAN (WoL) allows you to switch on a sleeping computer in the network, by +sending a magic packet. At least one NIC must support this feature, and the +respective option needs to be enabled in the computer's firmware (BIOS/UEFI) configuration. The option name can vary from 'Enable Wake-on-Lan' to -'Power On By PCIE Device', check your motherboards vendor manual, if unsure. -`ethtool` can be used to check the WoL configuration of `<interface>` by -running: +'Power On By PCIE Device'; check your motherboard's vendor manual, if you're +unsure. `ethtool` can be used to check the WoL configuration of `<interface>` +by running: ---- ethtool <interface> | grep Wake-on ---- -`pvenode` allows to wake sleeping members of a cluster via WoL using the +`pvenode` allows you to wake sleeping members of a cluster via WoL, using the command: ---- @@ -76,8 +78,8 @@ pvenode wakeonlan <node> ---- This broadcasts the WoL magic packet on UDP port 9, containing the MAC address -of `<node>` obtained from the `wakeonlan` property. The node specific -`wakeonlan` property can be set by the following command: +of `<node>` obtained from the `wakeonlan` property. The node-specific +`wakeonlan` property can be set using the following command: ---- pvenode config set -wakeonlan XX:XX:XX:XX:XX:XX -- 2.30.2 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel
