Some sentences are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so
take them from there and adapt them as needed.
Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.he...@proxmox.com>
---
Changes v1 -> v2:
* deduplicate email/changelog paragraph, move to top
* deduplicate enterprise repo introduction sentence
* very slightly reword some phrases
Changes v2 -> v3:
* fixed small typo (thanks, Sterzy!)
pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++++++++++++------------
1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc
index b0c2a95..065323c 100644
--- a/pve-package-repos.adoc
+++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc
@@ -8,6 +8,10 @@ endif::wiki[]
{pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as its
package management tool like any other Debian-based system.
+{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `root@pam`
+user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, the
+'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about an selected update.
+
Repositories in {pve}
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -57,21 +61,18 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security
bookworm-security main contrib
{pve} Enterprise Repository
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for all
{pve}
-subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for
-production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
+This is the recommended repository and available for all {pve} subscription
+users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for production use.
+The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
.File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list`
----
deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise
----
-The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
-'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
-
-You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
-Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
-{pricing-url}.
+Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the
+`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which you can
+find further details about at {pricing-url}.
NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line using a
`#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your host does
@@ -82,9 +83,10 @@ repository in that case.
{pve} No-Subscription Repository
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. Its
-packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a
subscription key
-to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository.
+As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access
+this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production
+use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these
+packages are not always as heavily tested and validated.
We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`.
--
2.43.1
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