Polished phrasing and aligned CLI command styling Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.laute...@proxmox.com> --- system-software-updates.adoc | 28 +++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/system-software-updates.adoc b/system-software-updates.adoc index 04c17f3..50f8c8e 100644 --- a/system-software-updates.adoc +++ b/system-software-updates.adoc @@ -4,21 +4,23 @@ ifdef::wiki[] :pve-toplevel: endif::wiki[] -We provide regular package updates on all repositories. You can -install those update using the GUI, or you can directly run the CLI -command `apt-get`: +Updates are provided on a regular basis for all repositories. Updates +can be installed via the GUI or by running the following commands on +the CLI: - apt-get update - apt-get dist-upgrade +---- +# apt-get update +# apt-get dist-upgrade +---- -NOTE: The `apt` package management system is extremely flexible and -provides countless of feature - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for +NOTE: The APT package management system is very flexible and +provides many features - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for additional information. -You should do such updates at regular intervals, or when we release -versions with security related fixes. Major system upgrades are -announced at the {forum}. Those announcement also contain detailed -upgrade instructions. +Updates should be installed on a regular basis. This applies even more +so to security related updates. Major system upgrades are announced in +the {forum}. These announcements contain detailed upgrade +instructions. -TIP: We recommend to run regular upgrades, because it is important to -get the latest security updates. +TIP: It is recommended to update {pve} on a regular basis in order to +have the latest security updates installed. -- 2.20.1 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel