This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent. Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80 characters per line wherever possible.
The reason why this first patch series doesn't start at the very beginning is because we are not yet happy with few things there. v3 -> v4: fixed some phrasings and minor issues reported on v3 v2 -> v3: rebased on current master v1[0] -> v2: * incorporating suggestions received * moved line length and white space fixes to separate patch [0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038938.html Aaron Lauterer (7): Overhaul Translation Overhaul System Requirements Overhaul Install from USB flash drive Overhaul Sysadmin Overhaul Package Repositories OVerhaul System Software Updates Fix whitespace and line length getting-help.adoc | 9 +- howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc | 4 +- pve-installation.adoc | 14 ++-- pve-package-repos.adoc | 154 ++++++++++++++++++----------------- pve-system-requirements.adoc | 75 +++++++++-------- pve-usbstick.adoc | 109 ++++++++++++------------- sysadmin.adoc | 40 ++++----- system-software-updates.adoc | 25 +++--- translation.adoc | 37 +++++---- 9 files changed, 229 insertions(+), 238 deletions(-) -- 2.20.1 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel
