Author: Alex Gaynor <[email protected]>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r3901:fc7730bf6827
Date: 2011-09-21 12:41 -0400
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/fc7730bf6827/

Log:    small rewrite.

diff --git a/blog/draft/py3donate.rst b/blog/draft/py3donate.rst
--- a/blog/draft/py3donate.rst
+++ b/blog/draft/py3donate.rst
@@ -2,11 +2,14 @@
 Py3k for PyPy fundraiser
 ========================
 
-Hello
+Hi,
 
-We would like to announce a donation campaign for implementing python 3 in 
PyPy.
-Please read the `detailed plan`_ for further details and donate using
-`our website`_.
+We would like to announce a donation campaign for implementing Python 3 in 
PyPy.
+Please read our `detailed plan`_ for all the details and donate using the
+button on that page!
+
+Thanks,
+The PyPy Team
 
 .. _`detailed plan`: http://pypy.org/py3donate.html
 .. _`our website`: http://pypy.org
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