Author: Armin Rigo <ar...@tunes.org>
Branch: 
Changeset: r64814:da8f1e729f4d
Date: 2013-06-06 20:25 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/pypy/changeset/da8f1e729f4d/

Log:    issue1501: minor English fixes

diff --git a/pypy/doc/getting-started-dev.rst b/pypy/doc/getting-started-dev.rst
--- a/pypy/doc/getting-started-dev.rst
+++ b/pypy/doc/getting-started-dev.rst
@@ -8,7 +8,8 @@
 interpreter is written mostly in RPython (with pieces in Python), while
 the RPython compiler is written in Python. The hard to understand part
 is that Python is a meta-programming language for RPython, that is,
-RPython is considered from live objects **after** the imports are done.
+"being valid RPython" is a question that only makes sense on the
+live objects **after** the imports are done.
 This might require more explanation. You start writing RPython from
 ``entry_point``, a good starting point is
 ``rpython/translator/goal/targetnopstandalone.py``. This does not do all that
@@ -37,7 +38,7 @@
 In this example ``entry_point`` is RPython,  ``add`` and ``sub`` are RPython,
 however, ``generator`` is not.
 
-A good introductory level articles are available:
+The following introductory level articles are available:
 
 * Laurence Tratt -- `Fast Enough VMs in Fast Enough Time`_.
 
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