Author: Carl Friedrich Bolz <cfb...@gmx.de>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r5179:c7690a124f48
Date: 2014-04-04 12:16 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/c7690a124f48/

Log:    another comment, small tweaks

diff --git a/planning/tmdonate2.txt b/planning/tmdonate2.txt
--- a/planning/tmdonate2.txt
+++ b/planning/tmdonate2.txt
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
 will focus on the various new features needed to actually use multiple
 cores without explicitly using multithreading (`goal 2`_ below), up to
 and including adapting some existing framework libraries like for
-example Twisted, Tornado, Stackless and gevent (`goal 3`_ below).
+example Twisted, Tornado, Stackless, or gevent (`goal 3`_ below).
 
 
 
@@ -252,7 +252,8 @@
 Paid work will be at $60/hour, but at least one developer who will work
 on the project &#8211; Armin Rigo &#8211; has committed to 2 hours of volunteer
 work per paid hour (so the total amount of money that we ask is divided
-by three).  A 10% general donation will go to the `Software Freedom
+by three XXX this sounds like *only* armin works on the project. maybe just
+divide by two?).  A 10% general donation will go to the `Software Freedom
 Conservancy`_ itself, the non-profit organization of which the PyPy
 project is a member and which manages all the issues related to
 donations, payments, and tax-exempt status.
@@ -355,7 +356,7 @@
 
 The idea is to apply the techniques described in the `goal 2`_ until we
 get a version of framework X which can transparently parallelize the
-dispatching of multiple events.  This might require some slight
+dispatching and execution of multiple events.  This might require some slight
 reorganization of the core in order to split the I/O and the actual
 logic into separate transactions.
 
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