Author: Armin Rigo <[email protected]>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r740:d8f9d0dfa415
Date: 2016-04-29 17:23 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/pypy.org/changeset/d8f9d0dfa415/

Log:    Rephrase

diff --git a/features.html b/features.html
--- a/features.html
+++ b/features.html
@@ -85,8 +85,9 @@
 <li><a class="reference external" 
href="https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/PowerPC";>PowerPC</a> 64bit both little and 
big endian</li>
 <li><a class="reference external" 
href="https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/System/390";>System Z (s390x)</a></li>
 </ul>
-<p>PyPy's x86 version runs on several operating systems such on Linux 32/64, 
Mac OS X 64, Windows, OpenBSD, freebsd.
-All others are only supported on Linux.</p>
+<p>PyPy's x86 version runs on several operating systems, such as Linux
+(32/64 bits), Mac OS X (64 bits), Windows (32 bits), OpenBSD, FreeBSD.
+All non-x86 versions are only supported on Linux.</p>
 <p>If you are interested in helping to move forward, see our <a 
class="reference external" href="howtohelp.html">howtohelp</a> page.</p>
 <p>We also have a beta release of <strong>PyPy3</strong> which implements 
<strong>Python 3.2.5</strong>.
 It runs on the same platforms as above.</p>
diff --git a/source/features.txt b/source/features.txt
--- a/source/features.txt
+++ b/source/features.txt
@@ -24,8 +24,9 @@
 * `PowerPC`_ 64bit both little and big endian
 * `System Z (s390x)`_
 
-PyPy's x86 version runs on several operating systems such on Linux 32/64, Mac 
OS X 64, Windows, OpenBSD, freebsd.
-All others are only supported on Linux.
+PyPy's x86 version runs on several operating systems, such as Linux
+(32/64 bits), Mac OS X (64 bits), Windows (32 bits), OpenBSD, FreeBSD.
+All non-x86 versions are only supported on Linux.
 
 If you are interested in helping to move forward, see our `howtohelp`_ page.
 
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