Am 05.06.2012 19:32, schrieb Laurent Pointal: > I started a first translation of my document originally in french. Could > some fluent english people read it and indicate errors or bad english > expressions.
Just one note up front: Languages or nationalities are written with uppercase letters, like English and French. Other common faults of that category are days of the week (Monday..) and month names (January..), although that's irrelevant for your doc. Another thing I noticed that was missing was that the "in" keyword can not only be used to iterate over a sequence (for i in seq:...) but also to test if something is contained in a sequence (if i in seq:...). "don't miss to close file after use": Use a "with" statement. "see verso for string formatting..." - what is "verso"? "dont" -> "don't" "char strings" -> "strings" (in the context of indexing, byte strings have the same syntax) "with several else if, else if..." - there is no "else if" but "elif". "block else for other cases" - this sounds as if it was blocking the else. Maybe "else-block for other cases", but English hyphenation is complicated and I'm not sure. Thanks for your work! Uli -- http://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/python-list
