+-- On Mon, 21 Dec 2015, Qinghua Jin wrote --+
| -void qmp_system_powerdown(Error **erp)
| +void qmp_system_powerdown(Error **errp)
|  {
| +    if (!runstate_is_running()) {
| +        error_setg(errp, "Can't powerdown the Virtual Machine when it isn't 
running");
| +        return;
| +    }
|      qemu_system_powerdown_request();
|  }

 - Maybe direct call to 'if (!runstate_check(RUN_STATE_RUNNING))' is better?  
   runstate_is_running too invokes the same. Not sure why are there two
   functions 'runstate_is_running' & 'runstate_check'.
 - Can't -> Can not
 - "...the Virtual Machine.." -> "...virtual machine.." (not capitalised)
 - "...when it isn't.." -> "as it is not..."
 - OR maybe just say -> "Virtual machine is not running"

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Prasad J Pandit / Red Hat Product Security Team
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