On 11/01/2016 12:19 PM, Stefan Weil wrote:
> Fix also some indefinite articles.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <s...@weilnetz.de>
> ---
> 
> I still don't understand the comment in docs/colo-proxy.txt.

Me neither.


> +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ secondary.
>  
>  == Usage ==
>  
> -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
> +Here, we use demo ip and port describe more clearly.
>  Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
>  -netdev 
> tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
>  -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66

Maybe:

Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
clearly describe the usage.

The remaining hunks are clear improvements, so:
Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <ebl...@redhat.com>

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Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

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