Re: [QUAD-L] Poems

[David O'Connell]

smurf.  pretty deep kidd, i'd like to read the whole thing too, please send a copy to me.  about the most writing i've done is http://www.users.qwest.net/~daveoc/story.html  and http://www.users.qwest.net/~daveoc/dbocphol.html

Dave

 

On 11/18/05, David K. Kelmer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

Hi Smurf,

 

I enjoy writing very much, and poems require good writing so I enjoy writing them more than thinking about publishing them.  I enjoy writing short stories, and of course I write to myself for my book!  :)

 

I'm sure I will enjoy the full version of your poem.

 

With Love,

CtrlAltDel aka Dave
C4/5 Complete - 29 Years Post
Texas, USA

[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

Hi CtrlAltDel,

 

Thanks for your email, was quite surprised with your reaction - the fact that anyone liked it!   I'll drop you an email with the full version sometime, hope you still like it when you've read it!! 

 

I noticed on the group that your a hiding poet as well, you should definitely write poetry more often!!!!!!!!!!

 

Keep writing,

 

Love Smurf xxx

 

In a message dated 16/11/2005 19:56:21 GMT Standard Time, [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:

Hi Smurf,

 

That is great for only being part of the poem.  I'd love to read the whole thing someday!

 

With Love,

CtrlAltDel aka Dave
C4/5 Complete - 29 Years Post
Texas, USA

[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

I thought I'd join in with a few of you and share one of my poems  that I wrote a couple of years ago with you all,  I won't share it all as it's quite intense, but here's a taster:

 

                    Day Dreams

 

As I sit thinking of things in the past,

There's a pain I feel that's certain to last,

Although I remember the happy times,

There's hidden days at the back of my mind,

I try to keep it locked up besides,

In a small tiny box deep down inside,

It's breaking up, it's breaking free,

That's all the things that happened to me,

I tried to scream, I often cried,

For the young girl so frightened,

At a young age she died.

 

An hour would pass and I still wasn't free,

From the terrible things that were happening to me,

I can't believe the things that he did,

The torture he played on a 14 year old kid,

The next morning I struggled with trying to fight,

With the events that happened the previous night,

I refuse to tell mum and this I am sure,

About all the pain her baby endured,

I don't understand why he done what he did,

After all, he was the same - a 14 year old kid

 

That's just a mixture of different verses, there's too many sensorship laws to read the whole thing in full!!
 

Take care,

 

Love Smurf xxx