Hi Jurgen,

Thanks for the review! I've filed a PR to address your comment, here: 
https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/74 
<https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/74>

Best,
Tommy

> On Dec 13, 2021, at 1:07 AM, Jürgen Schönwälder via Datatracker 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Jürgen Schönwälder
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This is a very clear and well written document. I believe it is ready
> to be published. I spotted only one minor editorial issue in the
> security considerations:
> 
>   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
>   distinguished from other frames using the different response
>   to loss.
> 
> The phrase "connections might be distinguished from other frames"
> feels a bit odd. How about this instead:
> 
>   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
>   distinguished from other connections due to their different
>   response to frame losses.
> 
> /js
> 
> 

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