Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-quic-applicability-16: Yes

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Hi,

Thanks for this document.  I think that these sorts of documents are incredibly
helpful and important for end users who are considering how to use IETF
technology.

I found the document to be well written, and only had a few minor
comments/questions:

1.
    If a QUIC receiver has opened the maximum allowed concurrent streams,
   and the sender indicates that more streams are needed, it does not
   automatically lead to an increase of the maximum number of streams by
   the receiver.  Therefore, an application can use the maximum number
   of allowed, currently open, and currently used streams when
   determining how to map data to streams.

I was wondering whether "can use" is right here, or whether this should be
"must use", given that the client cannot necessarily control how many streams
are available.

7.  Acknowledgment Efficiency

   QUIC version 1 without extensions uses an acknowledgment strategy
   adopted from TCP Section 13.2 of [QUIC]).

Nit: This doesn't quite scan/read easily.

9.  Connection Migration

   QUIC supports connection migration by the client.  If an IP address
   changes, a QUIC endpoint can still associate packets with an existing

For clarity, perhaps: If an IP address changes => If the client IP address
changes?

Thanks,
Rob



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