Maybe change "Draw more pictures" to "Begin by drawing pictures"?

(I suspect many people will jump quickly to that paragraph, and "Draw more pictures" is not only a little confusing, but that toy-looking tutorial will be a letdown for a lot of people. I say "Begin" both to introduce the paragraph, and as part of the link to the toy-looking tutorial, in hopes that people who want to dive in will take the nudge and skip over the "Begin" link. You might've had something like that in mind.)

Neil V.

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