Bonnie, as an author, I have to tell you your story was excellent. The only suggestions I would have is to check your spelling and sentence structure. You have a wonderful concept there, and a story that kept me glued to the screen until the end. Please be sure and send the rest. I want to know what happens! Good show!
Janet aka shadrach author of Flat Pan Jack Adventure series website: http://www.christianbuilt.com/flatpanjack/home_page _______ This mailing list is dedicated to the glory of God. Let the Golden Rule be your daily rule. Offering bucket: http://eBible.org/mpj/partner.htm To unsubscribe, send "unsubscribe rangernet" to [EMAIL PROTECTED] or visit http://rangernet.org/subscribe.htm http://rangernet.org Autoresponder: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
