I'd go for the greater granularity, personally. "Writer of foreword" sounds 
loads better than the characteristically wordy "writer of added commentary", 
which would, as Steven says, also be misleading. Although even better would be 
just "foreword" - although inconsistent in relationship, it's briefer and is 
all you need. I'm sure if you see a heading with it after the name few would 
mistake them as BEING the foreword.....

Martin Kelleher
Electronic Resources/Bibliographic Services Librarian
University of Liverpool

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Appendix I definition: "writer of added commentary": A person, family, or 
corporate body contributing to an expression of a work by providing an 
interpretation or critical explanation of the original work.
I do not think of authors of introductions as writers of added commentary; 
these seem to be separate functions based on the examples in 6.27.1.6. The MARC 
code list for relators has "Commentator for written text" and, with perhaps too 
much granularity, "Author of afterword, colophon, etc." and "Author of 
introduction, etc."  The function of introductions in my experience is often 
closer to a blurb or a "My friend x is as funny today as when we were at 
Harvard." A commentary seems to me to be a generally scholarly or 
pseudo-scholarly explication of the original text. Not that I have a better 
suggestion.

On a "related" note, what would be the best relationship designator for a 
corporate body functioning as a creator when applying RDA 19.2.1.1.1 a. "works 
of an administrative nature"  -- b. "works that reflect the collective thought" 
 or c. "report the collective activity" of the body?  My reading of "enacting 
jurisdiction" as a designator term would be that it should not be applied to 
the annual report of a government department--the designation seems to apply to 
a limited set of legal applications, such as constitutions. "Sponsoring body" 
also seems to be intended for a narrow set of conditions and in any case is in 
the category of other corporate bodies associated with the work rather than 
creator.  "Author" seems too broad.

Steven Arakawa
Catalog Librarian for Training & Documentation Catalog & Metadata Services, 
SML, Yale University P.O. Box 208240 New Haven, CT 06520-8240
(203)432-8286 [email protected]

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writer of added commentary

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On Fri, 7 Dec 2012, Goldfarb, Kathie wrote:

> I have been reading the discussions that there are too many relationship 
> designators, differences between types of editors, etc.
>
> However, reading through this list - is there a relationship designator for 
> the person who wrote the foreword?  The book in hand is: Thorton Wilder, a 
> life  ...  foreword by Edward Albee.
>
> If I use Edward Albee as an added entry, what relationship designator should 
> I use?  Or none?  With RDA is it expected that all name added entries have 
> the relationship to the book spelled out?   I am using some of the books I am 
> cataloging today to 'practice' some of the RDA changes.
>
> Thanks
> kathie
>
> Kathleen Goldfarb
> Technical Services Librarian
> College of the Mainland
> Texas City, TX 77539
> 409 933 8202
>
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