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> From: regext [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of James Galvin
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> ietf-regext-change-poll
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> Change Poll Extension for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-06

Comments:

There probably shouldn't be any normative language in the abstract. Please 
change "MAY" to "may".

Section 3.1.2: does the name attribute for the "custom" case identifier have an 
i18n considerations?

Section 5.1: The title of this section is "XML Namespace", but it seems to be 
conflating a registration request for an XML namespace and the XML Schema 
described in Section 4. I'm going to recommend registering both the namespace 
and the schema in the same way it's done in, for example, RFC 5731.

Scott

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