Hi, > On 15 Jul 2018, at 20:48, Hollenbeck, Scott <[email protected]> wrote: > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Tim Chown <[email protected]> >> Sent: Sunday, July 15, 2018 12:15 PM >> To: [email protected] >> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] >> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap- >> object-tag-03 >> >> Reviewer: Tim Chown >> Review result: Ready >> >> Hi, >> >> I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's >> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. >> These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational >> aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call >> may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors >> and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> This draft extends RFC 7484 to describe an operational (best) practice to >> allow Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) identifiers to be >> structured such that they can convey the authoritative server to use for >> additional RDAP queries. >> >> The concept of the draft is described well including examples. Two early >> stage implementations (Verisign Labs and OpenRDAP) are listed in the >> document. >> >> The draft is Ready for publication. >> >> One minor nit - the RFC 2119 text should probably be in its own section >> rather than within the introduction. > > Thanks for the review, Tim. I used RFC 8174 to guide placement of that text. > This is the guidance it provides: > > "Authors who follow these guidelines should incorporate this phrase near the > beginning of their document" > > So I just put it at the end of the introduction instead of creating an > additional single-paragraph section.
That's fine, it's a very minor point. I'm sure the RFC Editor will comment if it matters. I'm just used to seeing it in a section. Best wishes, Tim _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
