Scott, I believe the two identified changes you identified need to be correctly applied to the draft, and you are correct that the reference to draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-02 needs to be updated to draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-03. Gustavo and I will work to fix these issues.
Thanks, -- JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer [email protected] <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/[email protected]> 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 12/17/19, 10:52 AM, "regext on behalf of Hollenbeck, Scott" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: Thanks for the update, Gustavo. I think there are a few more minor edits to discuss. From Jim Gould's testing of the examples: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TYp4uMo0T-s " 6. Section 5.5.2.1.1 “idnLanguage CSV File Definition a. Example needs to be updated to use <rdeCsv:csv name="idnLanguage" sep=","> and not include the <rdeCsv:sep>,</rdeCsv:sep> element " " 7. Section 5.2.2.1.3 “hostAddresses” CSV File Definition a. Change reference of hostAddressesObj-YYYYMMDD.csv to hostAddresses-YYYYMMDD.csv" These are both still in the new document. Should they be? One minor idnit: "Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-02" That's all I found in my follow-up. Scott > -----Original Message----- > From: regext <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Gustavo Lozano > Sent: Monday, December 16, 2019 7:44 PM > To: [email protected] > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] [Ext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd- > objects-mapping-04.txt > > Hello, > > Hello, > > Version 04 of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping addresses the > feedback provided by Scott (thank you, great feedback) during document > shepherd review: > > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/TjRlL9OygsrZ_BXjnJDs7 > UeHRJk > > Regarding this suggestion: > > The IANA Considerations section requests registration of multiple XML > namespaces and XML schemas. For example, urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:rdeCsv- > 1.0 and urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:rdeCsv-1.0. Recent convention has been > to include “epp” in the URIS for EPP-associated namespaces and schemas, > e.g. urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:<identifier>. That convention should be > followed here, making the requested values > urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:rdeCsv-1.0 and > urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:epp:rdeCsv-1.0. > > The authors believe that this change will have a major impact on current > implementations, and a case can be made that the names should be > maintained as this specification has been in development and used for years. > > > Version 04 also addresses the feedback provided by Jim during the review of > the examples in the draft: > > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/Y2G2yHJppT1DSb8_TY > p4uMo0T-s > > No material updates on this version and it maintains backward compatibility. > > Regards, > Gustavo > > On 12/16/19, 14:10, "regext on behalf of [email protected]" <regext- > [email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the > IETF. > > Title : Domain Name Registration Data (DNRD) Objects Mapping > Authors : Gustavo Lozano > James Gould > Chethan Thippeswamy > Filename : draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-04.txt > Pages : 184 > Date : 2019-12-16 > > Abstract: > This document specifies the format, contents and semantics of Domain > Name Registration Data (DNRD) Escrow deposits for a Domain Name > Registry. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dregext-2Ddnrd-2Dobjects- > 2Dmapping_&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5c > M&r=VbweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s=d > RHXIrIokDu9b513pD7KkSDIA904T3B1dYm8FDEKgIY&e= > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__tools.ietf.org_html_draft-2Dietf-2Dregext-2Ddnrd-2Dobjects- > 2Dmapping- > 2D04&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=V > bweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s=f > zNZEyXpiNUZ8pX1UBA4gEY68MvVnvJAHsURnLagY50&e= > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_html_draft-2Dietf-2Dregext-2Ddnrd- > 2Dobjects-2Dmapping- > 2D04&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=V > bweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s= > m8dtoUmMsUb1vOniyTGlqL68p_JZFPp6_hImFW28trY&e= > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__www.ietf.org_rfcdiff-3Furl2-3Ddraft-2Dietf-2Dregext-2Ddnrd- > 2Dobjects-2Dmapping- > 2D04&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=V > bweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s= > GFLT5MAGmBDLTSc2srA_Q_sekbteWqK0uAGe38Vc_lo&e= > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=ftp- > 3A__ftp.ietf.org_internet- > 2Ddrafts_&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM > &r=VbweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s=t > clc4n9_FE_Aq0A_FDmwgiDNKWW5AyZyxjeE44HH1jc&e= > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list > [email protected] > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__www.ietf.org_mailman_listinfo_regext&d=DwICAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrc > rwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=VbweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd- > 0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=PJSRBLyB4XEyPjZ7HnhjuUhCCohufILMzA4_azq3bbc&s=1 > 71zABwuAahsoTrvqEHZmdL2HJP18Gd6Pm_kKgbTq90&e= > > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
