In reviewing draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05, below is my
feedback:
1. Replace “defnition” with “definition” in two places.
2. Section 2.3 Maintenance Elements
* I would modify the description of the <maint:item> element.
Specifically, change the second sentence to read like “This element is used in
a maintenance item EPP <info> response and <poll> message.”.
3. Section 3.1.3.1 “Query one maintenance item”
* The name “Query one maintenance item” could be shortened to “Info
Maintenance Item”.
* I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance Item command element
(<maint:id>) without making the reference to Section 2.3, since Section 2.3
defines the Info Maintenance Item Response.
* The command example incorrectly references
<maint:impact>blackout</maint:impact> instead of
<maint:impact>full</maint:impact>.
* The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent
dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)
* I would define the response similar to:
i. When an
<info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element MUST
contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance
namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:item> element
defined in Section 2.3.
1. Section 3.1.3.2 “Query maintenance list”
* The name could be updated to “Info Maintenance List”.
* I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance List element
(<maint:list/>), which is an empty element to indicate an Info Maintenance List
command.
* The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent
dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)
* I would define the response similar to:
i. When an
<info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element MUST
contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance
namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:list> element with
a list of <maint:listItem> elements. The <maint:listItem> element contains the
following child elements:
1. <maint:id>: <maint:id> defined in Section 2.3.
2. <maint:start>: <maint:start> defined in Section 2.3.
3. <maint:end>: <maint:end> defined in Section 2.3.
4. <maint:crDate>: <maint:crDate> defined in Section 2.3.
5. <maint:upDate>: OPTIONAL <maint:upDate> defined in Section 2.3.
1. Sect 3.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command”
* The dates in the poll response example should be updated to more
recent dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)
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JG
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On 12/1/20, 7:32 AM, "regext on behalf of [email protected]"
<[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of
the IETF.
Title : Registry Maintenance Notifications for the
Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
Authors : Tobias Sattler
Roger Carney
Jody Kolker
Filename :
draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05.txt
Pages : 20
Date : 2020-12-01
Abstract:
This document describes an Extensible Provision Protocol (EPP)
mapping for registry's maintenance notifications.
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