> -----Original Message----- > From: Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: Monday, February 15, 2021 6:57 AM > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; Jasdip Singh <[email protected]>; [email protected] > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext- > rfc7483bis-04: (with COMMENT) > > Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not click > links > or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content > is safe. > > Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-04: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.)
[SAH] [snip] > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Hi, > > Thank you for this update to RFC 7483. > > A couple of minor comments: > > In section 5.2. The Nameserver Object Class: It might be helpful to warn the > reader that some lines have been wrapped for display purposes. E.g. the link > value and href. Alternative, the approach/tooling from RFC 8792 could be > used. [SAH] I think I'd prefer to add a sentence somewhere earlier in the document top note that some examples include wrapped lines. > It also wasn't clear to me whether the Appendix "Changes from RFC 7483" > was going to be kept - there is no RFC editor note to suggest that it be > removed. > > Generally, I think that have a short section explaining how a RFC has changed > from a previously published version is helpful. But if this is kept, then I > would > try and condense this text down to just the list of important changes from > RFC 7483. [SAH] I'd like to address this using the same approach mentioned in my last note. Scott _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
