Hi Jim, Thanks for the feedback, these suggestions will be in the next version.
> On 6 May 2024, at 14:30, Gould, James <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org> > wrote: > > I support publication, so +1. Upon a re-review of -08, and I have the > following nit feedback: > Section 1.2.1.2 “Supported DNS record types” > "This eliminates the need to update this document in the event that new DNS > records that exist above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) see is > specified.". I believe that "see" needs to be removed, where it would read > "...above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified" or "...above a > zone cut (see Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified". > Address the multiple which’s in the paragraph below, such as: > “A server that receives a <create> or <update> command, which includes an > invalid DNS record type, MUST respond with a 2004 "Parameter value range" > error.” > Section 1.2.1.2.1 "Glue records" > Update second paragraph to remove the multiple which's, such as: > “A server supporting host objects which receives a command that attempts to > set TTL values for A and AAAA records on a domain object MUST respond with a > 2004 "Parameter value range" error.” > Section 2.1.1 “EPP <info> command” > Add comma to be consist to the Default Mode bullet, such as: > “The Policy Mode (Section 2.1.1.2), which …“ > Section 2.1.1.1 “Default Mode” > Update the first paragraph by addressing the run on sentence and use double > quotes for the attributes and values (“0” and “false”), such as: > “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which > includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “0” or > “false”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all DNS > record types that have non-default TTL values. These elements MUST NOT have > the “min”, “default” and “max” attributes.” > Section 2.1.1.2 “Policy Mode” Update the first paragraph by addressing the > run on sentence and use double quotes for the attributes and values (“1” and > “true”), such as: > “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which > includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “1” or > “true”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all > supported DNS record types, irrespective of whether those record types are in > use by the object in question.” These elements MUST have the “min”, > “default” and “max” attributes.” > Section 5.1 “Operational impact of TTL values” > Revise the first paragraph for readability, such as: > “Domain registry operators must consider the balance between the registrant > desire for domain changes to be visible in the DNS quickly, and the increased > DNS query traffic that short TTLs can bring. Historically, registry operators > have used a global TTL value for all delegations within their zones, which > could then be tuned to an optimum value.” > Thanks, > -- JG James Gould > Fellow Engineer > jgo...@verisign.com > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> > 703-948-3271 > 12061 Bluemont Way > Reston, VA 20190 > Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 5/6/24, 3:27 AM, "regext on > behalf of Mario Loffredo" <regext-boun...@ietf.org > <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of > mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org > <mailto:40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: > Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. 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