Thanks for your review, Anthony. I will make the suggested changes. G.
> On 16 May 2024, at 07:29, Anthony Somerset via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Anthony Somerset > Review result: Ready with Nits > > Hi, > > I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The > DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as > they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special > request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs. > For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir__;!!PtGJab4!55awyF4-Xlych34VHVJOir2Nxa7yd1CVRT6LR7eIsrLJ2_IKW7kd28j3KJwpWA0xGsun332v1zx2JtEKNF90KD0$ > [wiki[.]ietf[.]org] > > This document is well written and clear enough even with all the XML > references :) I believe all DNS related standards are respected here and this > would be a valuable extension to EPP. I believe this document is Ready but > with 1 important NIT and one clarification > > NIT > > While the IPv4 addresses referenced in the examples uses the documentation > prefix as per RFC5737 i note that IPv6 addresses are not following the same > principle as per RFC3849 - I recommend that IPv6 addresses in the document be > updated accordingly, from what i can see a simple find and replace on > "1080::" > with "2001:DB8::" should do the trick. > > CLARIFICATION > > I do have one clarifying query though with regards to section 3.1 on > Permitted > record types. How does a server signal to a client which record types are > permitted beyond returning an error to an update command. After reading the > <ttl:info policy="true"/> section again more carefully it says that supported > record types would be returned by the server - perhaps one could be more > explicit in section 3.1 to make reference to the ttl:info portion of the info > response? > > Thanks for your hard work on this draft > > Best Regards > > Anthony > -- Gavin Brown Principal Engineer, Global Domains & Strategy Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) https://www.icann.org _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- regext@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to regext-le...@ietf.org
