Hi Jasdip, That text works for me.
Regards, OS On Sat, Feb 1, 2025 at 11:06 AM Jasdip Singh <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > *From: *Orie <[email protected]> > *Date: *Friday, January 31, 2025 at 9:42 AM > *To: *Jasdip Singh <[email protected]> > *Cc: *[email protected] <[email protected]> > *Subject: *[regext] Re: AD Evaluation: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-geofeed-08 > > <snip> > > > > ## Nits > > ### Reads awkwardly > > ``` > 249 inetnum objects (per [RFC9632]), clients who find a geofeed link > 250 object within an IP network object MUST ignore geofeed data from that > 251 link that is outside the IP network object's address range. > ``` > > that link that -> any link that ? > > > > [JS] Since “that link” points to “a geofeed link object within an IP > network object”, using “any link” instead would not be correct. We would > like to propose the following text to remove any ambiguity: > > > > “… clients who find a geofeed link object within an IP network object > MUST, after retrieving the geofeed data from that link, ignore any entry > where the entry's IP address range is outside the IP network object's > address range.” > > > > Will that work? > > > yes, perhaps this might read slightly better: > > “… clients who find a geofeed link object within an IP network object > MUST resolve the associated geofeed data and ignore any entry where the > entry's IP address range is outside the IP network object's address range.” > > The MUST is having an awkward interaction with "retrieving" here, not sure > if it is your intention to make retrieving (dereferencing) a normative > requirement. > > dereferencing comes with other possible requirements, see: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc9110#section-4.3.4 / > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc3986#section-1.2.2 > > > > No, retrieving is not a normative requirement. Will the following work? > > “... clients who find a geofeed link object within an IP network object > and opt to retrieve the data from the associated link MUST ignore any entry > where the entry's IP address range is outside the IP network object's > address range.” > > Jasdip > > > > > > > > >
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