Thanks, Jim. I support publication with those updates.

Scott Hollenbeck
SAHollenbeck LLC

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> From: Gould, James <[email protected]>
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> Subject: [regext] Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-regext-epp-quic-04 (Ends
> 2026-04-13)
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> Scott,
> 
> Thank for you review and feedback.  See my response embedded below,
> prefixed with "JG-".
> 
> Thanks,
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> JG
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> James Gould
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> On 3/30/26, 2:55 PM, "Scott Hollenbeck" <[email protected]
> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
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> Minor feedback:
> 
> 
> In Section 3, I recommend adding a reference to RFC 7301 (Transport Layer
> Security (TLS) Application-Layer Protocol Negotiation Extension) as shown
> below:
> 
> "Mapping EPP session management facilities onto the QUIC service is
> accomplished with a combination of a QUIC connection with the "EoQ"
> ALPN [RFC 7301] value"
> 
> JG-Yes, the reference to RFC 7301 will be added.
> 
> The second paragraph in this section refers to an "eoq/1.0" ALPN value.
> Please ensure that this text and the text in the first paragraph is
> consistent.
> 
> JG-Thanks, this is a mistake.  The second paragraph will change "eoq/1.0"
> to "EoQ" with the same RFC 7301 reference ""EoQ" ALPN [RFC 7301]
> value".
> 
> The second-to-last paragraph in this section notes that "EoQ support is
> indicated by selecting the Application-Layer Protocol Negotiation (ALPN)
> token "EoQ" in the crypto handshake'. RFC 7301 doesn't include the word
> "token" at all. I'm not sure of what's correct here, but this text should also
> be consistent with the text found earlier in this section.
> 
> JG-This will be changed to "EoQ support is indicated by selecting the
> "EoQ" ALPN [RFC 7301] value in the crypto handshake' to be consistent.
> 
> In Section 11, please add a comma after my surname (Scott Hollenbeck,
> Lucas Pardue).
> 
> JG-Thanks, that will be addressed.
> 
> 
> Scott Hollenbeck
> SAHollenbeck LLC
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