Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension Title: RDAP Extension for DNS Time-To-Live (TTL Values) Reviewer: Ralf Weber Review result: Ready with Nits
Moin! I am an assigned DNS directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension. The draft is well written and the DNS related aspects are covered correctly. I think it is ready for publication. There is one nit that could be addressed. In section 6, Security Considerations, the authors try to describe that configuration of TTL values and the security considerations of those values are out of scope for the document. Which is correct but how it is described was a bit confusing, which might be because I'm not a native speaker, but as we want RFC to be readable I propose making this a bit more explicit e.g: This document only concerns itself with the representation of configured TTL values for domain and host objects. Security considerations for the actual configured TTL values are out of scope. Readers may refer to Section 6 of [RFC9803] for the security implications of configuring those values. It is a bit duplication, so maybe you can come up with a better wording, but the original paragraph took me some time to parse. So long -Ralf --- Ralf Weber _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
