On Wed, 07 Jun 2017 10:27:39 +0300
Paul Kocialkowski <[email protected]> wrote:

> > How about the following phrasing:
> > 
> > This component embeds a powerful processor that runs an operating
> > system, along
> > with dedicated memory and storage that can be dedicated or shared
> > with the main
> > processor.  
> 
> Going with:
> " This component embeds a powerful processor that runs an operating
> system, along with dedicated volatile memory. Its storage can be
> dedicated or shared with the main processor. "
Your version is even better.
Feel free to merge it with your improved version.

Denis.

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