Laurel Hale has posted comments on this change. Change subject: [DOCS] Release note updates for Impala 2.8 ......................................................................
Patch Set 9: (3 comments) Some nits you can think about. http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5668/9/docs/topics/impala_new_features.xml File docs/topics/impala_new_features.xml: PS9, Line 225: a flexible way to ingest, modify, or both data within a Kudu table. This phrase doesn't make sense to me because it tries to use "both" as a verb. Instead try, "a flexible way to ingest, modify, or perform both on data within a Kudu table." PS9, Line 330: <ul> : <li> : <p> : Impala can take advantage of the S3 encrypted credential : store, to avoid exposing the secret key when accessing : data stored on S3. : </p> : </li> : </ul> Not sure why this is a sub-set of the uber list. Doesn't look right in the build. I think this list item content should be added right after the colon that follows the bolded "Security" heading. PS9, Line 382: Impala debug web UI: Should this be bolded to call it out as a subheading like you did with "Security"? -- To view, visit http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/5668 To unsubscribe, visit http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/settings Gerrit-MessageType: comment Gerrit-Change-Id: I7c47f422e509cec6d3eb8aaa82294b584f393aed Gerrit-PatchSet: 9 Gerrit-Project: Impala-ASF Gerrit-Branch: master Gerrit-Owner: John Russell <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Alex Behm <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Ambreen Kazi <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Dan Hecht <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Dimitris Tsirogiannis <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Greg Rahn <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Henry Robinson <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Jim Apple <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: John Russell <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Laurel Hale <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Matthew Jacobs <[email protected]> Gerrit-Reviewer: Silvius Rus <[email protected]> Gerrit-HasComments: Yes
