John Russell has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: IMPALA-3401 [DOCS] Phase 5 of "Cloudera Manager" removal. Most 
of these fixes entailed hiding the paragraph where there are mentions of CM and 
writing a replacement paragraph for the upstream docs. This removes the CM 
references from the rendered docs. A 
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Patch Set 1:

(8 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6070/1/docs/topics/impala_isilon.xml
File docs/topics/impala_isilon.xml:

PS1, Line 90:     
Watch out for all these trailing spaces. (Let's see if we can adapt the 'eat 
trailing spaces' fixup code from our usual pre-commit hook for this Apache 
work.)


PS1, Line 103: audience="hidden"
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6070/1/docs/topics/impala_logging.xml
File docs/topics/impala_logging.xml:

PS1, Line 392:     <p audience="hidden">
             :         Impala uses the GLOG system, which supports three 
logging levels. You can adjust the logging levels using
             :         the Cloudera Manager Admin Console. You can adjust 
logging levels without going through the Cloudera
             :         Manager Admin Console by exporting variable settings. To 
change logging settings manually, use a command
             :         similar to the following on each node before starting 
<codeph>impalad</codeph>:
             :       </p>
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


PS1, Line 477: <p audience="hidden">
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6070/1/docs/topics/impala_webui.xml
File docs/topics/impala_webui.xml:

PS1, Line 58: <p audience="hidden">
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


PS1, Line 103: <note audience="hidden">
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


PS1, Line 233: <p audience="hidden">
Since you rewrote the paragraph in a way that's similar to the original, I 
don't think this audience="hidden" copy is still needed.


PS1, Line 283: For the meanings of these metrics, see
             :           <xref 
href="http://www.cloudera.com/documentation/enterprise/latest/topics/cm_metrics_impala.html";
 scope="external" format="html">
Here's one maybe for Jim. Is there a github page where someone can see in the 
source code the metrics and maybe an associated comment for each one?


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