CritasWang commented on code in PR #72:
URL: https://github.com/apache/iotdb-docs/pull/72#discussion_r1323963936


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src/UserGuide/Master/Deployment-and-Maintenance/Deployment-Guide_timecho.md:
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@@ -79,9 +79,620 @@ Users can start IoTDB standalone mode by the 
start-standalone script under the s
 Note: Currently, To run standalone mode, you need to ensure that all addresses 
are set to 127.0.0.1, If you need to access the IoTDB from a machine different 
from the one where the IoTDB is located, please change the configuration item 
`dn_rpc_address` to the IP of the machine where the IoTDB lives. And 
replication factors set to 1, which is by now the default setting.
 Besides, it's recommended to use SimpleConsensus in this mode, since it brings 
additional efficiency.
 
-## Cluster Management Tool
+### Cluster deployment
+
+#### Cluster management tool
+
+The IoTDB cluster management tool is an easy-to-use operation and maintenance 
tool (enterprise version tool). 
+It is designed to solve the operation and maintenance problems of multiple 
nodes in the IoTDB distributed system. 
+It mainly includes cluster deployment, cluster start and stop, elastic 
expansion, configuration update, data export and other functions, thereby 
realizing one-click command issuance for complex database clusters, which 
greatly Reduce management difficulty. 
+This document will explain how to remotely deploy, configure, start and stop 
IoTDB cluster instances with cluster management tools.
+
+#### Deploy cluster management tools
+
+##### Environment dependence
+
+The machine where IoTDB is to be deployed needs to rely on jdk 8 and above, 
lsof, netstat, and unzip functions. If not, please install them yourself. You 
can refer to the installation commands required for the environment in the last 
section of the document.
+
+Tip: The IoTDB cluster management tool requires an account with root privileges
+
+##### Deployment method
+
+###### Download and install
+
+This tool is a supporting tool for IoTDB Enterprise Edition. You can contact 
your salesperson to obtain the tool download method.
+
+Note: Since the binary package only supports GLIBC2.17 and above, the minimum 
version is Centos7.
+
+* After entering the following commands in the iotd directory:
+
+```bash
+bash install-iotd.sh
+```
+
+The iotd keyword can be activated in the subsequent shell, such as checking 
the environment instructions required before deployment as follows:
+
+```bash
+iotd cluster check example
+```
+
+* You can also directly use <iotd absolute path>/sbin/iotd without activating 
iotd to execute commands, such as checking the environment required before 
deployment:

Review Comment:
   带简括号,并且内容没有被 ``阔起来的需要转义



##########
src/UserGuide/Master/Deployment-and-Maintenance/Deployment-Guide_timecho.md:
##########
@@ -79,9 +79,620 @@ Users can start IoTDB standalone mode by the 
start-standalone script under the s
 Note: Currently, To run standalone mode, you need to ensure that all addresses 
are set to 127.0.0.1, If you need to access the IoTDB from a machine different 
from the one where the IoTDB is located, please change the configuration item 
`dn_rpc_address` to the IP of the machine where the IoTDB lives. And 
replication factors set to 1, which is by now the default setting.
 Besides, it's recommended to use SimpleConsensus in this mode, since it brings 
additional efficiency.
 
-## Cluster Management Tool
+### Cluster deployment
+
+#### Cluster management tool
+
+The IoTDB cluster management tool is an easy-to-use operation and maintenance 
tool (enterprise version tool). 
+It is designed to solve the operation and maintenance problems of multiple 
nodes in the IoTDB distributed system. 
+It mainly includes cluster deployment, cluster start and stop, elastic 
expansion, configuration update, data export and other functions, thereby 
realizing one-click command issuance for complex database clusters, which 
greatly Reduce management difficulty. 
+This document will explain how to remotely deploy, configure, start and stop 
IoTDB cluster instances with cluster management tools.
+
+#### Deploy cluster management tools
+
+##### Environment dependence
+
+The machine where IoTDB is to be deployed needs to rely on jdk 8 and above, 
lsof, netstat, and unzip functions. If not, please install them yourself. You 
can refer to the installation commands required for the environment in the last 
section of the document.
+
+Tip: The IoTDB cluster management tool requires an account with root privileges
+
+##### Deployment method
+
+###### Download and install
+
+This tool is a supporting tool for IoTDB Enterprise Edition. You can contact 
your salesperson to obtain the tool download method.
+
+Note: Since the binary package only supports GLIBC2.17 and above, the minimum 
version is Centos7.
+
+* After entering the following commands in the iotd directory:
+
+```bash
+bash install-iotd.sh
+```
+
+The iotd keyword can be activated in the subsequent shell, such as checking 
the environment instructions required before deployment as follows:
+
+```bash
+iotd cluster check example
+```
+
+* You can also directly use <iotd absolute path>/sbin/iotd without activating 
iotd to execute commands, such as checking the environment required before 
deployment:

Review Comment:
   带简括号,并且内容没有被 ``阔起来的需要转义



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