Dan Burkert has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: docs: revise security doc based on KUDU-1875 and add release 
notes for 1.4
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Patch Set 2:

(9 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6922/2/docs/prior_release_notes.adoc
File docs/prior_release_notes.adoc:

Line 40: [[rn_1.3.0]]
Todd, do we also need to bring over 1.3.1 release notes, or do those remain 
only on the 1.3.x branch?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6922/2/docs/release_notes.adoc
File docs/release_notes.adoc:

PS2, Line 41: s, but
I think this will read better if you break the sentence into two after 
'interfaces'.


PS2, Line 48: e restricted by a firewall
I would also add that it can be safe if authentication and encryption are 
configured to be required, just so people don't get worried.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6922/2/docs/security.adoc
File docs/security.adoc:

PS2, Line 50: kudu
uppercase Kudu


PS2, Line 53: , b
Same comment about splitting this sentence in two.


PS2, Line 56: using '--trust
nit: configured using the


PS2, Line 58: allows
to allow


PS2, Line 59: erwise restricted by a firewall,
            : malicious users may be able to gain una
same thing about clarifying the role of required authentication and encryption 
here.


PS2, Line 119: kudu
Kudu


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