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Change subject: docs: add info about Sentry
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Patch Set 6:

(19 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc
File docs/security.adoc:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@154
PS4, Line 154: Fine-Grained
> nit: Fine-grained ?  Not sure whether they usually capitalize the after-hyp
after the hyphen in a title is fine


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@160
PS4, Line 160:
> Maybe, add a note for about exposing possibly sensitive information via deb
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@165
PS4, Line 165: web-ui,i
> Maybe, add some information to specify what this semantically means (like t
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@192
PS4, Line 192:
> nit: I'm not sure whether it's intentional, but I can see two different pre
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@211
PS4, Line 211: example, in Sentry deployments that don't support `UPDATE` 
privileges, to
> Maybe, explicitly mention that all DDL requests are processed by Kudu maste
I list the authorization policy for Masters and Tablet Servers below. I'm 
hesitant to blanket all Master requests as DDL since not all of them are 
necessarily DDL (e.g. GetTabletLocations).


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@211
PS4, Line 211: ents that don't support `UP
> maybe just 'to perform or reject the requested action' ?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@211
PS4, Line 211: ple, in Sentry deploy
> Not sure I see where and what is described above.  Drop?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@216
PS4, Line 216: er has. If
> propagated
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@217
PS4, Line 217: action, the
> encapsulate
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@218
PS4, Line 218:
             :
> Why not present simple tense?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@221
PS4, Line 221:
> Does it make sense to mention that DDL operations are authorized not via au
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@222
PS4, Line 222: ry,
             : privileges are p
> ... the window of potential ...
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@225
PS4, Line 225: pening a Kudu table. Kudu
> nit: maybe, use present simple tense instead?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@231
PS4, Line 231: tablet servers in a cluster is much higher than the number of 
Kudu masters,
> ... or if the token isn't valid.
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@263
PS4, Line 263: tion>
> drop ?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@264
PS4, Line 264:
             : --sentry_serv
> maybe, mention that this is one of the master's flag
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@269
PS4, Line 269:  own. The 'had
> nit: use present simple instead?
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@271
PS4, Line 271:
> ... authorizes requests on its own, ...
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/13759/4/docs/security.adoc@276
PS4, Line 276:
> nit: use present tense ?
Done



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