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Change subject: WIP [docs] Kudu 1.12 release notes draft
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Patch Set 5:

(3 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15685/5/docs/release_notes.adoc
File docs/release_notes.adoc:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15685/5/docs/release_notes.adoc@75
PS5, Line 75: If setting
            :   `--time_source=auto`, Kudu masters and tablet servers use the 
built-in NTP
            :   client synchronized with dedicated NTP servers available via 
host-only
            :   network in AWS and GCE cloud environments, otherwise Kudu 
masters and tablet
            :   servers rely on local machine's clock synchronized by NTP
I think this sentence needs to be broken up. E.g.:

When the option is set to `--time_source=auto`, Kudu masters and tablet servers 
use the built-in NTP client. Built-in NTP client is synchronized with dedicated 
NTP servers available via host-only networks in AWS and GCE cloud environments. 
When dedicated NTP servers are not available, Kudu masters and tablet servers 
rely on local machine's clock synchronized by NTP.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15685/5/docs/release_notes.adoc@105
PS5, Line 105: * Kudu tablet servers and masters now expose a metric for the 
number of tablet
should we mention the name of the metric here?
Also, I suggest moving this section to be right before or right after the 
section about metric severity levels.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15685/5/docs/release_notes.adoc@118
PS5, Line 118: * The built-in NTP client is now fully supported as the time 
source for Kudu's
I think this section and section about chronyd should be moved up right above 
the section about --time_source



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