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Sorry, most of the issues I raised in this review are unrelated to the changes 
in this patch.


docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 5)
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    We should have a space after `#` for headings (e.g. `# Configuration`). 
Here and below.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 8)
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    We don't seem to wrap "Mesos 0.23.0" in backquotes in the rest of our docs.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 21)
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    `s/http/HTTP/`



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 24)
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    `s/this binary/Mesos`? `SSL_CERT_FILE` is an environment variable, so it's 
not necessarily specific to a binary, right?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 35)
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    Should this be something like `SSL_VERIFY_DEPTH=(N)`? `4` isn't the only 
possible value right?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 51)
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    1. `s/SSLV2/SSL V2/` since we wrote `TLS V1.2` rather than `TLSV1.2` or 
something like that?
    4. `s/if you understand the risks fully/if you fully understand the risks/`



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 74)
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    `s/_Please note:_/__NOTE:__/`?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 85)
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    1. `s/_Please note:_/__NOTE:__/`?
    2. `s/talk/speak/` or whatever term we're using to describe SSL 
communication.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 88)
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    `s/SSL_SUPPORT_DOWNGRADE/`SSL_SUPPORT_DOWNGRADE`/`


- Michael Park


On July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> (Updated July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
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> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> See summary.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Joris Van Remoortere
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