> On Dec. 14, 2015, 9:43 a.m., Benjamin Bannier wrote:
> > docs/getting-started.md, line 57
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/41286/diff/1/?file=1160537#file1160537line57>
> >
> >     Not a native speaker, but shouldn't it be `s/If/When` here.
> >     
> >     Also, please `s/and rerun/to run/`.

I think we could go either way with If/When, but I'll change it. I think we 
want to say 're-run', not just 'run' because we are talking about running it a 
second time after the upgrade.  I agree with saying 'to' instead of 'and' 
though, that's just bad english.


- Kevin


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> (Updated Dec. 14, 2015, 4:51 p.m.)
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> Review request for mesos and Neil Conway.
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> Bugs: MESOS-4118
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-4118
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> The instructions for El Capitan are identical to Yosemite, with one
> caveat: if upgrading from Yosemite to El Capitan, you need to rerun
> 'xcode-select --install'. This commit adds a note of this.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/getting-started.md 0225c9db985261b9c3057b2b376f29b1c80784fb 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41286/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Kevin Klues
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