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Fix it, then Ship it!





docs/multiple-disk.md (line 83)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180673>

    "write-ahead logs"



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 87)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180674>

    "mount a physical disk" seems a bit better, since we talk about a single 
mount point later in the sentence.



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 92)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180671>

    "over-run" => "exceed"



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 93)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180672>

    "file-system mounted" => "file system in use"



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 125)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180675>

    I'd say "destroyed" w/o backticks.



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 127)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/#comment180676>

    "destroying"
    
    "strongly encouraged"



docs/multiple-disk.md (line 128)
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    "do not get penalized" => "are not penalized"


- Neil Conway


On Feb. 16, 2016, 1:58 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> (Updated Feb. 16, 2016, 1:58 p.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Jie Yu and Neil Conway.
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> Bugs: MESOS-4531
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-4531
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> Added documentation for multiple-disk support.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/home.md a2000a35a6eeaa7b36cb1796532263f5a703ac88 
>   docs/multiple-disk.md PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/persistent-volume.md 4d7821fc4a18ab3c6261418fb8062e6bdf90d5a3 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/43583/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Joris Van Remoortere
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