> On Oct. 18, 2016, 4:55 a.m., Avinash sridharan wrote:
> > docs/configuration.md, line 1003
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/52783/diff/3/?file=1539581#file1539581line1003>
> >
> >     s/the agent/that the agent/
> 
> Benjamin Bannier wrote:
>     Not a native speaker but to me this seems to just make the sentence more 
> wordy (and one should probably use `which` instead of `that`). Maybe a native 
> speaker could chime in how this should be phrased.

Valid point. Maybe @Neil or @BenM can chime in?


> On Oct. 18, 2016, 4:55 a.m., Avinash sridharan wrote:
> > docs/linux_capabilities.md, line 3
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/52783/diff/3/?file=1539582#file1539582line3>
> >
> >     s/described/describes
> >     
> >     to add support for `Linux Capabilities`
> 
> Benjamin Bannier wrote:
>     I do not understand your second request. How should the sentence read 
> after applying you suggestion?

I was suggesting:

This document describes the `linux/capabilities` isolator. The isolator adds 
support for controlling `Linux Capabilities` of containers launched using the 
`MesosContainerizer`.

(Re-worded my suggestion a bit actually).


- Avinash


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On Oct. 18, 2016, 7:51 a.m., Benjamin Bannier wrote:
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> (Updated Oct. 18, 2016, 7:51 a.m.)
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> 
> Review request for mesos and Jie Yu.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-6376
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-6376
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
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> 
> Added documentation for mesos-containerizer Linux capabilities support.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/configuration.md c83a58eb6884c8d8c37880a745e04cf0b789ebdc 
>   docs/linux_capabilities.md PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/mesos-containerizer.md 76544625838845fe2817347fea483a60ab250f99 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/52783/diff/
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> 
> Testing
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> Checked with local renderer.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Benjamin Bannier
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