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Fix it, then Ship it!





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    I know it's not you, but since you're touching this text, please fix it. If 
these are protobuf messages names, write `TaskInfo` (mind backticks!), if it is 
English text, write "task specification".



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    Why have you killed this paragraph? Maybe somehow combine it with the 
previous one?



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    s/refuse/will refuse



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    Let's explicitly mention here that the agent is allowed to recover its ID 
after a host reboot. And it will fall back to wiping the state if the 
configuration is incompatible.



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    s/register/will register



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    Thank you for cleaning this up!



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    Any reason to remove this section in this RR?



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    s/NOTE:/**NOTE:**



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    Maybe "The old and the new state must match exactly"?



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    \n" ?



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    Maybe "to remove or to modify"?



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    s/slave/agent



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    s/which/which, e.g.,/


- Alexander Rukletsov


On Dec. 12, 2017, 11:16 a.m., Benno Evers wrote:
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> (Updated Dec. 12, 2017, 11:16 a.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Alexander Rukletsov and Vinod Kone.
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> Update docs to mention new  flag.
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> Diffs
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>   CHANGELOG 8b3d3642c50a60b6ce0f9d27031c2077254473de 
>   docs/agent-recovery.md 35cd5b1a38a099d87ab337df116b7356fcaa7c36 
>   docs/configuration/agent.md d629912e391cebd88c9d0daeabc3bbf436344e95 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/64450/diff/1/
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> Testing
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> One pass of proof-reading.
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> Thanks,
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> Benno Evers
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