Filiz, task force members, Thank you for changing from 'document' to 'assemble a list'. That is much clearer and partly addresses a major concern.
A number of real concerns remain with the current draft. Therefore I will make three specific proposals to improve it in the following message. This is not 'wordsmithing' but a matter of substance. I do not particularly enjoy having to have this conversation. During a sabbatical year other activities appear much more gratifying. Best Daniel
