On 6/16/06 12:39 AM, Ron Savage wrote:
> Under the heading 'Multiple objects', you refer to perl_manager_class and
> make_manager_class, but it's not clear these are actually in the
> Rose::DB::Object::Metadata class

Well, the methods names do link to their documentation in the Metadata
class, but of course that doesn't help when not viewing the POD as HTML.  I
added some more explicit text.

> A bit further down you have 'If you decide not to heed my advice and
> create...'
> which is clearer when rephrased as
> 'If you decide not to heed my advice, but rather wish to create...'

I tweaked that sentence as well.  Thanks.

-John




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