> I have two concerns about the ILNP docs:
> 
> a) Editorial: I think they perhaps could be re-organised for
>   additional clarity. In particular, there isn't a single, cohesive
>   description of ILNP. There are important bits and details spread
>   over the 4 docs.
> 
> b) Architecture: I have the feeling there are some rather important
>   questions unanswered (e.g. around state), which should either be
>   addressed or perhaps noted as being TBD, as you suggest.
> 
> I don't know if these concerns are significant enough that they need to be 
> addressed before publication as RRG product, given the objectives/constraints 
> you describe.


Please feel free to work with Ran on these issues.  As always, verbatim text 
contributions are the most constructive way of commenting.

Tony

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