Tony,

I concur with Eliot Lear and Scott Brim -- this looks fine.

The addition of the word "necessarily" is entirely factual.
Similarly, clarifying the frequency/number/timing of the 
in-person meetings is entirely factual.  So I concur that
these edits are "editorial" and helpful.

Yours,

Ran

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