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> From: Volker Hilt <[email protected]> > Date: November 20, 2010 10:14:06 AM GMT+09:00 > To: <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [IRSG] IRSG Review Request: ILNP document set > > Here is my IRSG review for the ILNP document set. > > - http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rja-ilnp-dns-07 > * Overall, the draft is clear and well written and contains > appropriate citations and references. > > * After reading the draft and without having the benefit of being > involved in earlier discussions, I think it would be very helpful for a > reader to have an overview section that introduces the general > principles and protocol flows of ILNP. This would in particular be > useful as this draft serves as introduction to the entire ILNP document set. > > * Section 1: It would be nice to have one paragraph at the beginning > that introduces the problem space addressed by the draft. > > * Section 5.3: how does a node determine which locator to use? > > > - http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rja-ilnp-dns-07 > * Overall, the draft is clear and well written and contains > appropriate citations and references. > > * Section 2.1: the text should probably say what <I> contains. > Related to that, in the description of the ID DNS record, it would be > good to describe what is contained in the ID field. > > * remove extra "x" before Section 4 > > * Can ID and L32/L64 records for the same owner be combined > arbitrarily? Are there combinations that are invalid (if so is there a > possibility/need to express this in DNS)? > > - http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rja-ilnp-nonce-06 > * The draft is clear and well written and contains appropriate > citations and references. > > - http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rja-ilnp-icmp-06 > * The draft is clear and well written and contains appropriate > citations and references. > > * Section 4: does an ICMP Locator Update message replace all locators > for the sending node in the Correspondent Cache? I.e., is it necessary > to delete locator entries that are not in the ICMP message? > > Thanks, > > Volker _______________________________________________ rrg mailing list [email protected] http://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/rrg
