I appreciate your taking the time to read the document carefully.
However, I am confused by most of your requested changes.
The changes seem to reflect some (there is plenty of disagreement) conclusions that folks have reached during the course of the IRTF RRG work. But the document is not the goals for some new set of work. It is the goals we roughly agreed on early on. The purpose of publication is for the historical record, not to drive some new set of work. New work will have to define its own goals.

I am also confused by your comment on the description of the existing mobility solutions. I am pretty sure that there exist solutions with the properties enumerated in the document. Given that existing solutions, while they may have implicit notions of identity, do not have a clear distinction, I do not see the problem with describing the existence of solutions which use renumbering and tunnelling. We could, perhaps, debate which solutions have that property.

Yours,
Joel

On 11/23/2010 10:09 AM, Templin, Fred L wrote:
See below for my comments on sections 3.4 and 3.5:

Fred
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3.4.  Decoupling location and identification

    Numerous sources have noted that an IPv4 address embodies both host
    attachment point information and identification information.  [IEN1]
    This overloading has caused numerous semantic collisions that have
    limited the flexibility of the Internet architecture.

FLT>>  OK.

    Therefore, it
    is desired that a solution separate the host location information
    namespace from the identification namespace.

FLT>>  Not OK. Change to: "Therefore, it is desired that a solution
FLT>>  provide the host with an identification and/or endpoint address
FLT>>  that remains stable even if the location change.

    Caution must be taken here to clearly distinguish the decoupling of
    host location and identification information, and the decoupling of
    end-site addresses from globally routable prefixes; the latter has
    been proposed as one of the approaches to a scalable routing
    architecture.  Solutions to both problems, i.e. (1) the decoupling of
    host location and identification information and (2) a scalable
    global routing system (whose solution may, or may not, depend on the
    second decoupling)

FLT>>  OK.

    are required and it is required that their
    solutions are compatible with each other.

FLT>>  Not OK. I think Robin is right that we will not see a
FLT>>  combination of disparate solutions such as ILNP+IRON both
FLT>>  being deployed in conjunction. What is quite possible, however,
FLT>>  is a combination of IRON+HIP since HIP is only instrumenting
FLT>>  the hosts and can be used perfectly well over an IRON network.
FLT>>  Still, why would such a combination be *required* when it may
FLT>>  not actually even be desireable in all cases? Suggested change
FLT>>  is to replace the above phrase with the phrase: "are possible."

3.5.  Scalable support for mobility

    Mobility is the capability of a host, network, or organization to
    change its topological connectivity with respect to the remainder of
    the Internet, while continuing to receive packets from the Internet.
    Existing mechanisms to provide mobility support include

    1.  renumbering the mobile entity as it changes its topological
        attachment point(s) to the Internet;

    2.  renumbering and creating a tunnel from the entity's new
        topological location back to its original location; and

FLT>>  Strike the phrase "renumbering and". Renumbering would
FLT>>  imply that the end system's endpoint address changes
FLT>>  when in fact it is only the end system's locator address
FLT>>  that changes. This is true for both MOBIKE and Mobile IP,
FLT>>  and also applies to the kinds of mobility solutions
FLT>>  associated with the CES architectures.

    3.  letting the mobile entity announce its prefixes from its new
        attachment point(s).

    The first approach alone is considered unsatisfactory as the change
    of IP address may break existing transport or higher level
    connections for those protocols using IP addresses as identifiers.
    The second requires the deployment of a 'home agent' to keep track of
    the mobile entity's current location and adds overhead to the routers
    involved, as well as adding stretch to the path of inbound packet.
    Neither of the first two approaches impacts the routing scalability.
    The third approach, however, injects dynamic updates into the global
    routing system as the mobile entity moves.  Mechanisms that help to
    provide more efficient and scalable mobility support are desired,
    especially when they can be coupled with security, especially
    privacy, and support topological changes at a high-rate.

FLT>>  OK.

    Ideally,
    such mechanisms should completely decouple mobility from routing.

FLT>>  Not OK. It should be perfectly OK for mobility to interact
FLT>>  with the routing system as long as the routing churn is
FLT>>  localized and minimized. Strike this sentence.
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