Alexis:

I have a concern with this sentence in Section 2:

      Normative descriptions of protocols,
      systems, etc. must be fully represented in the text of the RFC,
      and must not be contingent on comprehension of any SVG.

This is a MUST statement, but the use of "etc." makes it very vague.

In addition, It seems to be saying the same thing as the previous sentence/

Also in Section 2:

   *  SVGs must remain static after publication of the RFC, so there may
      be interactive, multimedia, or other elements that cannot be used.

I think we need clarity on "cannot be used".  I think you mean that these 
features of SVG cannot be included in the SVG.

Russ

> On May 1, 2025, at 1:38 PM, Alexis Rossi <alexisrossir...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello, 
> 
> We believe that draft-editorial-rswg-svgsinrfcs-00 is ready for Working Group 
> Last Call. 
> 
> The draft can be found at 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-editorial-rswg-svgsinrfcs/
> 
> Thanks, 
> Alexis

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