The draft obsoletes 9280 but doesn’t change the version? That seems a likely source of confusion. For example, the second paragraph says things have changed based on what we learned, but it’s still 3? It says it “updates 9280” and then next sentence says it obsoletes it. Perhaps that ship has sailed, and I alone am left in the rough. :) In Sec 1, you must change “Whereas” to “While” I read Section 1.3.1 carefully a couple of times. Perhaps I am being thrown by use of the phrase “tooling and code” and would want to see “Data definitions” (to cover the XML vocabulary). I *think* that changing that is covered by the “expected to solicit input” (second to last) paragraph in that section. I would rather see that called out explicitly. +1 to Mirja’s “remove the IAB members” section. Also just remove the Acknowledgement section. Both of those were about 9280, not this document.
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