Hi!
This is a nice and to-the-point document! I just have a couple of minor
comments and nits.
I’m going ahead with the IETF Last Call and scheduling this document on the
IESG Agenda (probably for Oct/15). Please post an update before Oct/8.
Thanks!
Alvaro.
Minor:
1. Section 2.1. (Procedures for establishment of multiple BFD sessions)
* s/Section 6 of [RFC5884]/Section 4 of [RFC5884]
* "It further states that a BFD session SHOULD be established for each
alternate path that is discovered.” To avoid confusion as to where that
rfc2119 keyword was used, please use quotes when referring to the text in
rfc5884.
* "The remaining procedures of session establishment are as specified in
[RFC5884].” Please be specific where in the process should the specification
in this document should be considered. In this case I’m assuming that (if
rfc5884) has been clear from the start, then this new procedure would have been
in place right after the third paragraph in Section 4..
Nits:
1. 2.1. (Procedures for establishment of multiple BFD sessions):
s/discriminator (remote)/(remote) discriminator
2. Section 4. (Encapsulation) is superfluous.
